Evaluation question 7: Progression from preliminary task

Comparing my preliminary task with my final project:

There are several key advancements from my preliminary task that we did better when creating the final project. Such as:
-The camera angles and shots are better planned out and therefore they give the film a much better look overall, this is because how the shots link together is much more organic and seems to link together much better than before.
-The acting looks much more believable as we cut down the dialogue to nothing, this makes the situation more believable as the characters are judged on emotion rather than words, making the films much better than the preliminary task.
-The sounds from editing are much better as they are cleare. Along with the radio effect on the background music the sound makes the final project better present

Evaluation question 6: What have I learned about technology through the process of creating our Thriller opening?

Here is the Slide rocket website Answer to my evaluation question 6:

Evaluation question 5: How did you attract/Address the audience?

For our movie we tried to build suspense mainly to attract the audience into wanting to see more or our film. We did this by slowly building up the tension on screen to a point where you only see the villain for the first time over half way through the intro. This makes the audience want to see who the villain is, and wonder how our movie is going to be a thriller. Here is a screenshot of the first sighting of the villain:

The effect of creating suspense helps us to attract an audience as we can sell our film on that basis. This is also enhanced by the roles the characters play in terms of relating to the audience. By the villain wearing converse, a popular youth clothing brand,  teenagers especially can relate that to their own lives and therefore make the link that the villain is actually as young as them. And the by the main character having an everyday , same job same routine we can sell the product on the idea that it can happen to anyone, a common them in thriller movies. The location set in a regular London neighbourhood gives it a 'closer to home' felling as the audience would see that this could be a something that happens near where they live and make the film that much more engaging for them.

Evaluation Question 4: Who would be the audience for your Thriller?

Here is the Slide Rocket presentation for Evaluation Question 4:

Evaluation question 3:Possible distribution methods

Here is a prezi answering the 3rd evaluation question:

Evaluation question 2: How does our film represent different social groups?

This prezi explains how our film represents different social groups:

Evulation Question 1: Challenging conventions and forms of real media products

From our thriller we have noted that there are certain aspects that we have added that differentiates us from regualr thrillers produced. They mainly tend to focus on the characters themselves and the story line that they are invloved in. Such as :

-From this picture we can see certain things that both conform to regular thriller villain ideas whilst also changing it slightly to attract a larger audience.

-From looking at the mask the villain has we would associate it from a sexual idea that certain people like. This adds another level to the character as the viewer then begin to question his motives even further.

-From the rest of the villain's costume we see that he shows signs of youth. Wearing converse trainers it makes the audience recognise the brand as something that younger people would generally wear. This then adds another level as well as we begin to slowly put some of the peices together on this characters possible life. Even though we barely see him, we are able to slowly gain an idea on who and what this man is, and some of the psycological reasons why he is doing what he is doing.

-Our film manages to keep the secretive, shady tone that usual thrillers do whilst also adding more of a horror element to the characters and their demises.

Our Finished Thriller

Here is our final project completed, that we have published on to Youtube:

This is the final edited version of our thriller that we posted on youtube.

Prezi Evaluating thriller

Here's the link to my prezi.com :Thriller Evaluation
http://prezi.com/3sbzpzqppmge/thriller-evaluation/?auth_key=644940ffa9c7311552c1e9506d5c9c041beb909e

Problems with editing

For some reason when we attempted to upload our video to the mac computers. At one point exactly the movie kept on freezing, we tried to re-download the movie but it didn't work, so we are going to save the movie onto a USB again and attempt to re-upload it.

Post filming : Analysis of Preliminary task screen still in Comparison

From this shot we can see problems that i have learned to deal with whilst creating the final movie.
I can see the following problems:
-The character handing michael the note has been cut out of shot. This was down to the limited space we had whilst filming. A way to fix his could be to pick places to film with more space to place the camera.




-The top of Michael's head has been cut off because of the same problem.
-The camera is slightly shaky in real time which was because i was attempting to catch all of the points into  a small screen.

How does or film represent certain social groups in society?

I believe that our film relates more specifically to an adult couple between 20 and 40. I think this because of it's heavy "Who dunnit?"style and how it is filmed. Because of the build up to the point where the man is attacked there is a suspense that would be seen in something like a television audience. Where as the slight horror element to it can also help us appeal to the younger audiences of perhaps 18-25.

Visual analysis

From images whether they are a poster or a still from a movie how you interpret it as an advert is very important, because a still or picture can tell you a lot about a movie and can help your understanding of it.

-From this picture we can see that this person has another side to him.
-We can say that the second person inside him is controlling him as he is centred in the middle of the poster.
-We can see perhaps that the main character has a darker side to him than the boy in the middle because his picture is in black and white whereas the boys is in colour.
-We can see that maybe the man in the shot may not be real compared to the boy, this is because the boy is in colour whereas the man is in black, it's as though he has a real 'character'.

-From this shot of Gangster number 1 we can see that they are thugs.
-We see this because of the gun that he is holding and how it is silenced, plus the suit he is wearing, means that aren't dirty they do things correctly.
-The suit as well tells us that the character in shot has alot of money because that is an expensive looking suit.

What media type would distribute our film?

Because this is just the beginning few minutes of our film, the best places for it to be distributed could be:

- TV, such as a short advert with a small fragment of our film in it to give the TV viewer a look at the mood that our film has. I would say the possible best part from our film to use would be the routine and the end, as it doesn't take up to much time and is a short look into our film.
Another type of media that would be good for advertising would be the internet, because it is worldwide the opening can be used to give fans a glimpse at the full movie, whilst also broadening our potential viewers.

Using software, technology and Hardware

From creating our film I learnt many things about using different forms of technology:


-When creating our storyboard i learnt how to use final cut express and editing and cutting clips together to make a flowing video of images that roughly represents the action that we have in our film.

- I learnt how to use the digital camera to take pictures of storyboard parts and also during the act of filming.

-I've learned how to use a filming camera and adjust it in order to create good shots that look really smooth and fit in well within thriller conventions to create suspenseful shots.

-I've learned how to use editing software on the computer to edit together clips and make them fit together well.

How our film appeals to people in teen-age years and older.

-We have certain ideas that link our film to people in their teens. With it's pop style music and edgy, almost horror-ish following of characters as seen in movies such as Scream. Because of the suspense we have in the movie, we can utilize this concept which is common in the horror genre whilst also sticking to the conventions of a thriller.
-This is how we can make it appealing to members of older audiences, because it still has links and ideas that are common in thrillers that have been made in the past, such as suspense, 'Who dunnit?', ect.
-Because we haven't used much graphic violence in our thriller we are able to show it to members of young teens , this helps us as it helps us widen our age group and can lower the age rating somewhat.

How does our film meet thriller conventions?

In our thriller we have added certain conventions that fit in with the thriller genre:
-For example we have many questions that are left to the audience hat is created by what is on screen. Because we don know why the killer is in the house and why he is targeting this man. This is common in thriller as it makes the viewer want to watch more.
-We have the villain in our film which is common in thrillers but we don't know who he is yet.
-We have a good setup that is based around levels of suspense that is set up by how the villain 'creeps' around unseen to the protagonist, but is seen by the viewers.
-We have the classic, murder/conflict beginning that is common in thriller movies as in films such as Zodiac, A history of violence ect.

Extended film analysis: Kill list

Kill list has many conventions of the thriller genre. Using suspense, shock and a strange questioning vibe to the entire film. The reason being is that the two main characters are questionable and we aren't sure whether they are good or bad characters. With some interesting twists and strange, almost 'whiney' music the film creates a chilling, suspense filled atmosphere.

Here is a small clip from the film.
http://youtu.be/HEX0uwkhH58

The IDENT

At the beginning of our thriller we have created an ident that has our own logo and production company name with it. This helps make the production seem more realistic and also adds a little more to the films experience, here is a screen shot of the creation of the ident:

As you can see the ident has our production company name in it and also shows evidence of the animation that we have with it of a smokey background with a shining logo.

Shot lengths and details

During the beginning of our film the speed of editing increases as the sequence repeats, but when it changes on the final time, the shots change. For example, when the main character is in his bed the second shot of him lasts a number of seconds, unlike the first time. And as he picks up the alarm clock the camera zooms into his face in order to emphasise to the viewer that this time something is different and that something is wrong. This slight change really switches the mood of the film from being a kind of cheery opening into something more sinister. Add that to shots such as the one where the villain walks past him in the mirror and it puts the viewer in suspense as they know someone is there but the main character doesn't.

Graphic Matches

In our thriller we have a graphic match right at the end. It comes when the main character (Laimonas) is hit from behind by the mysterious villain (Conor) , as he hits the wall, the camera blurs and refocuses to him in another room but in the same position. Then the camera spins and it shows us he is actually lying down on the floor.

Pre filming storyboard

This is the link to our storyboard animatic that we made prior to filming, you will see that it is slightly different to the finished product.
http://youtu.be/QoDtrgdI-1o

Filming successes

We were able to film our movie to the plan without any real technical problems. This made it easier for us to edit bits of the plan to create better shots that create a better atmosphere for the viewer. By using certain views and shots we were able to make the opening sequence very realistic and good looking.

Costume

For the main character we had two different attires for him. The first being for the morning when he has woken up and is in his pyjamas, the second is him in his suit as he leaves his house for him to go to work.

The villain wore all black with a black leather mask that made him seem creepier.

Problems with filming

On the day of filming , we realised that none of us had taken a camera out in order to film. Luckily we had someone acting in our group that had their own camera for us to film with. Along with the absence of the camera we had no tri-pod either to rest the camera on. To get around this problem we constructed a tri-pod out of a washing rack and a shoe, a picture of which i will post shortly. Despite how it may sound the camera stayed very still and we were able to film a very good movie with some very good shots from what we had.

Filming

We filmed the vast majority of our film on sunday after deciding to film it at Chloe's house as her house fit the description we was looking for the best. Whilst we were there we decided to change the ending slightly in order to bring in a separate location and slightly more questioning ending.

What we changed: 

- Rather than the main character dying at the end after a blow to the head. We changed it so that when he is hit on the head by the antagonist he wakes up afterwards in a garage surrounded by tools and torture equipment, this implies to the audience that he is about to be tortured or killed, but at the same time leaves then with the questions such as why? where? who? ect, we felt that Tori's garage fit this description best and we are going to film that scene shortly.

Script and Characters Interactions

As there are no words in our film it is important that we create a good suspense from the sounds of the man's daily routine and the music he hears everyday, the scripting is there easy as we can now focus more on the actual screen action rather than possible poor acting of students.

Final filming details of our thriller opening

These are:

Name of film; Routine
Music; 'Oh me, Oh my' - The 99's (permission givevn)
Titles;
   "A CCTF Production"
   "Starring Conor Wilkins and Liamonas Andrejouskas"
   "Music By Tori Wheatley"
   "Casting By Conor Wilkins"
   "Edited By CCTF"
   "Directed By CCTF"

Filming Areas

We needed certain things in order to stick as closely as we can for our film, this meant evaluating each other's houses to see who's house fits the description best for what we need, such as a bathroom with a mirror next to it, a bed with a bedside table, so we are going to use Chloe's house to film. This is the type of thing we were looking for.

This shows the sort of things we my need and why as an example.

Audience research evaluation

Along with the survey we created we also made a questionnaire for people to answer regarding Thrillers. This involved questions about preferences and things they might consider when discussing thrillers. We found that many people liked the idea of suspense in a thriller and the idea of leaving the audience with questions on the film. Here's an example of someone's response:

(This shows one of many responses that said "suspense" when we asked them to write down 3 words they would associate with a thriller.)

Music

For our film Tori contacted and unsigned band named "The 99's" and asked them if we can use their song "Oh me Oh my" in our thriller opening, they said yes and we're adding it in to the routine sequence.

Script and sound for the movie

We wet with the idea that our opening wont have any dialogue but will have some distinctive sounds to it that help the audience get more involved in the main character's daily routine , for example really making the sound of the man brushing his teeth loud and the image right in the face of the camera, this and many other jump cuts of the man doing mundane but loud things helps the audience get more involved with the opening.

Title sequence research

By looking on artofthetitle.com, w can see films that have good and effective title sequences by analyzing stills fro their opening credits. The title sequence of a movie is important as it can help set the tone for a film and help us see who has made the movie.
An effective and good movie title sequence is Vertigo:

-Vertigo's title sequence shows close ups of the main character with the credits so we can be quickly introduced to who is in the film and also by looking at her facial expressions we can figure out her emotions.

The name of our Production Company

We went with the name "CCTF" for our production company, the name comes from our first name initials together, and Conor is making the ident for our production, which i'll explain when its finished.

Red Herrings

This is a device that diverts the audience from the significance of something of importance in a film, this can work with other devices such as a enigma. An example of this is in Alfred Hitchcock's "North by Northwest", in which suspense is created.

Call sheet

Date - 26th January
Location - 2 Bull lane , Dagenham , Essex
Cast - Conor Wilkins, Laimonas Andriejauskas
Crew - Tori Wheatley, Frankie McFarlane , Conor Wilkins , Chloe Bencini-Harding
Props - bed, alarm clack , clippers, towels , knife , fake blood, shower , mirror , mask, cereal, toothbrush , toothpaste.
Costumes - man has a suit, well dressed, murderer wearing all black and a mask.

Title Sequence Analysis

Here is a selection of thriller title sequences that are effective:

IN THE CUT:
-It has creepy sounding music that contradicts the atmosphere of the opening scene.
-It has a gritty, slightly dirty tone to the filming.
-The actual titles are small and sharp looking
-The shots have always got something creepy in them, such as the man with the clinched fist in a leather glove.
-The title of the film comes up like blood from the 'cut' on the ice.

SE7EN:

My survey

This is a link to my survey that people can take in order for us to understand what people want to see in a thriller movie.
http://www.surveymonkey.com/s/R9VVSGP
We'd appreciate it if you took part in our survey.

Here's a print screen of my survey to show you how it looks in a small sample:

Going into our film...

I now understand the basic elements that go into a successful film and what it takes to make a film effective and enjoyable for the audience. Considering we are only making the first couple of minutes of the film it is a challenge to make it shock the viewers but we feel our idea has a good idea for the opening and will leave the viewers many questions , which is something that great thriller movies do.
A good example of a film that makes us ask a lot of questions is memento :

This is a film that has a lot of questions surrounding its opening as it is filmed as though the story is in reverse.

More audience research

This is a screen shot of my survey that i made on SurveyMonkey, it is centered around thrillers and people's individual preferences.

Treatment sheet

Here are the details of our treatment sheet:

OUTLINE OF IDEAS:
-Guy has OCD, wakes up everyday to the same routine, when one day the routine changes and everything is messed up.
-I.e , alarm is on the other side of the bed.
-There's writing on the mirror and reports on radio suggest that he has murdered someone.
-Finds a body and a bloodied knife.
-Then we realize its someone else as someone comes from behind him and strikes him down.
Last shot he is looking at the mans feet walk away as the audience is left with a "who done it?" question.

WHAT RESOURCES WILL YOU NEED? (ACTORS PROPS SETTINGS):
-Double bed / Bedroom
-Alarm clock
-Cereal / kitchen
-Toothbrush / toothpaste / bathroom
-Street door
-Knife
-Fake blood
-Killer mask
-Killer for actor
-Man to play the OCD man
-Dead body actor

JUSTIFICATION OF IDEAS IN RELATIONSHIP TO GENRE:
-"Who dunnit?" idea
-Long suspens building opening

Possible Audience?

For our film I would suggest that the audience would be best suited to an almost horror like fanbase as there is a quick early murder that makes the viewer ask alot of questions. Because it would seem at first that there is no motive it makes them question why this man in particular would be targeted for a murder. There may be plans to place slight clues in the opening sequence where we realize something is wrong, but not too many as it is the opening of the film. Because of this I feel that the idea of a suspense, shock type of audience would be perfect for the audience.

Film's name

We decided that the name of our film will be "Routine."
We choose this idea because it explains somewhat what the movie is about. It sets around a man who has Obsessive compulsive disorder and lives with the same routine everyday of his life. For example, the alarm goes off at the exact same time everyday, he puts his slippers o, eats the same cereal ect. It all changes one day when the mans routine is interrupted by a series of breaks in his daily chain of events that are out of the ordinary, for example when he wakes up the alarm is on the other side of the bed, his slippers are gone and the cereal is empty. When the man eventually goes down stairs he is hit by an unknown figure and thats where the beginning ends, the rest of the film would be based on finding the killer.

Our film

In my group i am working with Chloe Bencini Harding, Conor Wilkins and Tori Wheatley. We are designing and making a thriller that fits all criteria for the course , we well try to keep the quality good on the film and are currently discussing the idea of the film, we an idea , which i will post about when finished.

Past Student's work

We looked at work former classes have produced in order to learn from what they had done well and what mistakes they had made whe filming their own thrillers in the past. To do this we looked at a selection films made by past students, which varied in different types of thriller and quality.
 From this i learned:
-That you need to have good continuity in your shots , such as door opening looking realistic
-That costume and makeup ect, must be good in order to enhance the visual effect of the film
-That the plot has to be solid in order for the film to make sense
-The film has to be shot well to look presentable
-Minimal dialogue is better because you cant rely on the acting of students in the film
- Settings have to be good because they can ruin your shot if not planned correctly

More Thriller features

More thriller features:
-Protagonist and antagonist
-Deaths
-A problem that needs to be solved
- A  kidnapping
-"Walk away shot" from an explosion by the main character
-Mind games
-Plot "twists"
-Dramatic music
-A trade between two parties
-Ticking clock

Thriller Features

List of things usually in thrillers:
-Usually set in Big cities
-Usually follows a "Hitman" style character
-Has sneaky sections where the character is trying to avoid people
-Evil, enemy characters that the protagonist conflicts with
-Fast, jumpy edits to show action and tension
-Femme Fatale character
-Darker areas are used in sneaky sections
-Always a fight scene
-Always a chase
-Cliff Hangers

Narrative

In films the plot and conversations between characters is essential to making a good movie, if the dialogue is sloppy or the plot is bad, the audience may lose interest in what is happening in the film and what is going on. There are ways in which that you can create more excitement in an audience.
You can create alot of questions for example for the audiences in order to make them interested in what is happening and wonder what certain things have to do with the film. this is an example of how a simple device can improve a film dramatically by making the audience interested in it.
A plot has to have many characters and ideas to it if you are looking to make the film a deeper experience for the audience to view, and by linking them to the story , it can create a better movie, an example of simultaneous storylines branching from a main film is the departed, which has many main characters revolving around a story with many branch stories.

General film language

More certain film terms.
Continuity editing: When filming certain actions, we have to make sure that they look realistic and fluid in comparison to what the action would look like in everyday life. For example if filming someone opening and closing a door, you have to make it look like one fluid motion and not disjointed, if it does look this way, this is bad continuity and can make the audience aware of bad filming.
Enigmas: Enigmas are questions that are given to the audience by what is happening on screen, these can be such questions like who done it? why are they doing that? ect, these questions keep an audience intersted in what is happening on screen.
CliffHangers: These are events that happen at the end of a scene that make the audience wonder whats going to happen to the people in question in the scene? this could be danger or trouble.

Suspense in Thrillers

Thriller movies rely on suspense in order to create an atmosphere that provokes the viewer into wanting to watch the rest of the movie whilst at the same time gives them an element of power as they know what some of the characters don't know on screen. This creates a will they/ wont they scenario of questions that revolves around the action on screen.

An Example of this is Alfred Hitchcock's "Rope"

In rope the story revolves around to men who have murdered someone in a test of intelligence to see whether or not they can get away with it . They store the body in a chest and cover it with a cloth. They then have a party in which they place decorations and food on the chest as they attempt to fool guests and get away with murder. The suspense lies with the audience in that we know that the body is in the chest but we then question whether or  not the men will be found out by any of the guests.

Maguffin

A Maguffin is a object in a movie that is the main character desires and although it may be the object of a film, it doesn't mean it is the central point of conversation and conflict in the film.

For example: In Alfred Hitchcock's film Notorious, the plot is that an American spy sends a woman to spy on her husband who is a Nazi, and is suspected to be doing something wrong. Infact the Nazis are plannig to steal uranium. In this case, the Maguffin in the Uranium.

Film Analysis

Here is some evaluations of the beginning of films that come under the thriller genre:

MEMENTO: Momento has a very interesting beginning but at the same time still come into the thriller genre by some of the conventions that it holds. For example it has a central question for the audience which is based on the story, so for example in Momento, the main questions are who and what is the man looking for? as the film is made backwards, we get those questions. It has a gritty style to it that is common in thrillers, and has some very graphic action that is common in violent, murder happy thrillers.

BRICK: Brick has a shocking opening that once again makes the viewer wonder what has happened prior to the scene we start with. It begins with a boy looking anxiously over the other side of a stream at a girl who appears to be dead. This immediately gives us a question as to what has happened, the music adds to the tension as well as there is a creepy xylophone style song playing in the background. When we realize he is a schoolboy at the end, we see a creepier side to the story.

ZODIAC: Zodiac's suspense during the opening of the film comes from the murder that occurs when the married woman takes a younger man out to the woods during the 4th of July. The music does a great job of setting the mood at ease by being quite relaxed, but when the murderer returns back in his car we realize that there is a problem. The killing itself gives us the question  of who killed them, and why?

Chuck Jones' 'rules'.

When creating the character and scenarios for the RoadRunner cartoon segment in Looneytoons. Creator Chuck Jones created a set of rules that they must obide by when creating the cartoon. For example, one of the rules was that the coyote may never harm the road runner and the road runner may not harm it, but only mock it by saying "meep meep". This is an example of rules in a production.

The road runner never actually touches the Coyote.

Films tend to have rules aswell depending on the genre and also just filming in general. An example of this is the 180 degree rule, this means that the camera must never flip over to the other side of a conversation during a scene, this is because if done otherwise the audience can gbecome confused with whats going on, on screen.